The COLTALITION part tenChapter Thirty Six"Well now, where am I? Ah! 31st and Mane" shouted our colt"Move buddy!" our colt was shoved by a passing pony"Hey you...." our colt was pushed again"Watch it!" shouted a mare"Do you know...." interrupted again"Yo, I'm walking here!" a stallion said"Excuse me I am...." A passing subway train mutter his speechWell, he was in the heart of Manehatten. The hustle and bustle of a vast subway system mutter all around him. 'Keep Moving' is the term in this city. If you stand still, you will be trampled. Tourist, business colts, homeless, and all sorts of life roam through this city. But our colt was here to sight see
The COLTALITION part nineChapter Thirty OneAs Big mac struggle with the gun on his back, he thinks of his sister. The only thing keeping him sane. He always wonders how she could run such a prison, and give away old granny smith and him to the enemy. This plays throughout his head constantly during the trip to Canterlot with pinkie and white."Only a few more minuets, then you can rest your hooves my dearies!" Pinkie exclaimedMac knew she was kidding, she always had a dark humor. Big Mac looked over to white, she seemed dull. No expression. Just like the night before during the massacre of the traitors..."You no what, this looks close!" Shouted Pinkie"Yes ma
The COLTALITION part eightChapter 27Our colt, Blueblood, has finally met the one known as Twilight Sparkle. Though he does not no that he is the 'chosen one' yet. They appear in the War Room in a flash of a second."Fillies and Gentalcolts! I am pleased to announce i have returned with our keystone of ponies. The one that will bring down our evil ruler!" Twilight exclaimed to the other Ops ponies in the room."Now, prince, me and Sorin' have some... business to discuss about your adventure. Feel free to talk to any pony while your stay here at Beehive." said TwilightOur colt then is left in a room with a group of what appeared to be harden criminals. they
The COLTALITION part sevenTwenty fourWe return to our colt and his companion Sorin'"Hey Blood? You all right?" Sorin' said trying to console our grieving colt "Listen, we still have a mission to do, let's not let her death be a pointless one.""..." our colt said"Know, I know how your feeling sort of. I had it all, fame, money, ponies. I tossed it all away for a one night with this most enchanting pony. It cost me my fans and my wife. It cost me a job and money and screwed over four other ponies. It was a loss to the nation if you ask me. You don't want to hear my problems do you. Well, I'm trying I mean HOLY PEGASUS!"There in the center of town was a burning
The COLTALITION part sixChapter twenty one"I always hate doing this. Come her little pony and let me eat the poison apple.""Stop, please, what dose this prove you do this all the.... AHHHHH HAHHAH WAHHHH""MMMMM juicy"We follow the cruel master of insanity. Pinkie Pie. She is leaving the office of a 'follower' and has to make her way out. She has three ponies following her dressed in some black suites. She struts with a confident matter out of the encampment of looking for a gun. She just got to the gate when she found a piece of 'hardware' that couldIMMMBOOMA blast of heat blew past Pinky, messing up her mane in a disorganized, well more disorganized fas
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